Keeping in mind that I know nothing about the game that Cal is from: I find him such a wonderful and fascinating character. His struggle between being attached and his devotion to being a Jedi is well thought out and engaging to read.

Do I pin his conversations with Arden so I can read their interactions? Yes. Yes I do. But I love to see the passion you have for him as well, which is clear with how you write him.

Also: The whole psychometric reading he did on Arden over the weekend was fantastic! I so enjoyed seeing him in Arden's plot and can't wait to see what you'll do with that paring next!